Analysis of Vow and promises



Why should I know?
Where you live or go
What you think about me
You are individual and free

It is not me that follow
My eyes probe you and go
In the direction you appear
Try to venture and be near

It is mutual
Love is not casual
It is two way traffic
Very much essential with its basic

I may not travel towards you
But mind may cross and see through
It won't mind if you ignore
As it has no other job than to adore

In love there is hate or insult
For whatever confusion you can always consult
Love demands nothing but only consent
So there is no room to deceive and resent

I may know you full
And witness it as lover fool
It is great honor to be at service
As to please you with vow and promise


Scheme AABB AACC DDEE FFGG HHII XXJJ
Poetic Form Quatrain  (83%)
Metre 1111 11111 111011 11010001 1111110 111101 00010101 1110011 11100 111100 111110 1010101110 11110011 1111011 1111101 11111011101 01111101 11001011101 1011011001 11111101001 11111 01011101 1111011110 111111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 671
Words 144
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on May 25, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Hasmukh Mehta

am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I hold technical qualification like Diploma in Radio/engineering .I have done English and Hindi stenography as well. I had mastered the art in Morse telephony too. I am associated with several welfare organizations and served long time as Union leader too. I am at present working as hobby writer. I write poems on various subjects and invite suggestions from all the quarters. I have written one memoir named “As I see it” and ready for publication. One interesting part of writing I would love to share with all my reader friends. I am not sure weather it may be the same case with all as I do not want to be caught in any controversy. When I sit on my personal computer, there is absolutely no thought in mind as to what is to be picked up as thought and written. These all things I leave it to the discretion of almighty to fill my mind with relevant ideas. So far I have been graced by Him and as result able to compose about 4000 poems. I have be awarded with 4 achievement award from the www.ezinearticles.com for successfully meeting with their standard. I am writing on many sites so as to be associated with reader friends all over the world. I am thankful to all those who have supported me in my initial days. more…

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