Analysis of Vision



I am blind, I cannot see,
The dark so overpowering, nothingness but fear of not being able to see,
I fumble, I fall, I grab out at all,
But wait, I'm not blind, it is simply night and there is no light,
I have yet to open my eyes.


Scheme AABCD
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111101 01110101001111101011 1101111111 111111110101111 11111011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 226
Words 49
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 170
Words per stanza (avg) 49
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Submitted on May 30, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kev Green

Just a person who might have suffered more than his fair share of suffering but still lives to tell the tale. Found writing and writing found me. Everything I do is dedicated to my dear Wife and children Emma and Jamie and my mentor Rob Middlehurst. more…

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