Analysis of Vanishing Animals



Time,
stretching out, encompasses curtains,
on distant savannas, of shimmering heat.
And animals vanish:
ibex and antelope;
elephant; grouse.
Here once, now going or gone.
And time vanishes now.
Animals gone, one has no focus.
Moldering greenery, mute,
moves mainly in wind --
pliant life, submitting to breezes,
passive in sun. Rooted in spots
not chosen or won.
Plants do not vanish.
They prosper.
We do not prosper.
We vanish, as animal,
and go hardly noticed.
A dirge,
as animals vanish.
We vanish unnoticed.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1 101010010 11001011001 010010 10010 1001 1111011 011001 100111110 11001 11001 101010110 10011001 11011 11110 110 11110 1101100 011010 01 110010 110010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 491
Words 84
Sentences 13
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 398
Words per stanza (avg) 84
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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L. Larry Amadore

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