Analysis of Up In Smoke
An instantaneous moment is caught
within the eye's peripheral vision,
combustible concern casually
careens into sparkled indifference
as random selection ignites the chair,
with a smoker's harsh cough for company
and nicotine dreams at the back of mind
flames crack their wings with delicious laughter.
There's a second of realisation
below the fear of death's internal rage,
tobacco's cylindrical bright-lit want
stares need in the face with thin manic greed,
the price of addiction goes up in smoke,
blue-curled vapour seeks organic matter
with pleasant alacrity while paper
hopes wither in suspended animation.
Scheme | XABXXBXC AXXXXCCA |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 101001011 0101010010 1011000 0101100100 1100100101 1010111100 010110111 1111101010 101011 0101110101 010100111 1100111101 0110101101 111101010 1100100110 1100010010 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 598 |
Words | 93 |
Sentences | 3 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 8, 8 |
Lines Amount | 16 |
Letters per line (avg) | 32 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 254 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 47 |
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Submitted on June 04, 2010
Modified on March 05, 2023
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