Analysis of To heavens?



I am badly gripped
In deadly seven
I have to forget
About the heaven
Permanently I have to dwell
In awesome f*ck*ng hell
GOD will tie in my neck
An ugly ringing bell
Where ever I go
The demons will smell
The will eat my flesh
In each and every sermon
Putting spices salt and lemon
My bones will be broken
I will be completely shaken
I will fall the devils TAKEN
Fire will be burning ablaze
Burnt grass I have to graze
I have to forget ham and maze
The crispy finger chips and lays
Off course there will a Wal-Mart
But I will be forbidden playing smart
Just I have to rely on heavens smell
In the hell I have to permanently dwell…………


Scheme ABCBDDEDFDGBBBBBHHHHIIDD
Poetic Form
Metre 11101 01010 11101 01010 10001111 0101111 111011 110101 11011 01011 01111 01010010 10101010 111110 11101010 11101010 10111001 111111 11101101 01010101 1111011 1111100101 1111011101 00111110001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 617
Words 125
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 501
Words per stanza (avg) 125
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Submitted on December 27, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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