Analysis of Time



Time is telling us we have no time.
Not for anything important only lies.
When can we turn to what's inside?
Without time we're all lost without a sign.
Can we proceed to the next minute?
Is there time for the last breath nigh?
We're lost in the mess of telling it like it is.
What time do you think it is right now?
Does it really matter at all what the clock says?
What if there was none at all?


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJ
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 111011111 1110010101 11111101 0111110101 110110110 11110111 110011101111 111111111 111010111011 1111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 388
Words 81
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 304
Words per stanza (avg) 81
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Submitted on August 20, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Yvonne Sensing

I've been writing since I was a kid...I enjoy putting thoughts onto paper it's like clearing out my mind. I'm not saying I'm good, but I try. Still I write, but the thoughts in my head get jumbled and it all comes out wrong. I know what I want to say, I hope it comes out that way. Anyway, I still write maybe to leave a little piece of me behind. Not here to cause trouble or be a hero. I am a kind person with a big heart and I only do what makes me feel good. Poetry happens to make me very happy and joyful. Sharing my most inner thoughts makes me a target it seems, with folks that don't like me. I assure I am not a hater, but I will stand up for myself for what's right and true. This site has made me feel like were all family and here for each other not a place to bicker and fight among us, but to enjoy each others work with respect and love. Please understand I am not here to cause problems, I am here for the same reasons you are. more…

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