Analysis of The Scissors Slipped



The bathroom mirror is disturbed--
shower steam spills from its cyclops eye.

My paper doll is slumped
against the toilet,
orifices near her hands where
such apertures shouldn't be,
and the ceiling hangs
galaxies from tinsel-thin whispers.

And the color of the floor shrieks--
stop where you are--

you weren't invited to this reversal of baptism.
The silverfish skittering
from heating vents to feet are the
only creatures who appreciate her;
they come unsolicited,
they bear no hidden agendas.

And don't blame me, dear, for this despicable act--
you were the one who
cracked open her wrists, not
me. Not me.


Scheme XX XXXAXX XX XXXXXX XXXA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (35%)
Metre 0110101 10111111 110111 01010 10001011 11101 00101 100110110 00101011 1111 110010110101100 011 11011110 101010100 110100 11110010 011111101001 10011 110011 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 588
Words 101
Sentences 6
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 6, 2, 6, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 20
Font size:
 

Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

31 sec read
1

Discuss this Rebecca Anne Frenzl poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "The Scissors Slipped" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 18 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/87832/the-scissors-slipped>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    More poems by

    Rebecca Anne Frenzl

    »

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    13
    days
    16
    hours
    21
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    In what year did Alexander Pope wrote "Farewell to London"?
    A 1690
    B 1744
    C 1715
    D 1725