Analysis of The Rain Falls As The Tears Did



It's only appropriate that on the first anniversary of your passing
The rain falls as the tears did one year ago
It's not any easier today then one year ago either
Yes I still cry and I miss you as much as ever
You were like a son to me
No one has ever touched me with the ease that you did
you gave me so much and I hope our dept is even
I only wish I could of told you how much I loved you
East Cost , You are my son
I know that this first year has been difficult for us all
Luke still talks about you every day
Brad caries your school I.D with him every where he goes
And Jesse asked about you and wants to watch the video tapes
Of your time with us
Sissy and I still cry knowing we will never have
Another friend like you
That day took ten years and slammed them down on me
Oh how I cried
I cried and I cried and I cried the tears will always fall
It started raining this morning as it did that day
Just about the time everything started one year ago
Tonight I will light candles through out my house in your honor
good by my son

Rick Rhythm Williams
                                                            (c) P.H.P 10/24/2004


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Poetic Form
Metre 1100100110101001110 01110111101 1110100011110110 1111011111110 1010111 1111011101111 11111011101110 11011111111111 111111 11111111100111 1110111001 1111111100111 0101011011101001 11111 1001111011101 010111 11111011111 1111 1101101101111 1101011011111 1010110101101 011111011110110 1111 11010 11
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,172
Words 226
Sentences 4
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 23, 2
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 421
Words per stanza (avg) 112
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Submitted on October 10, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Rick Rhythm

I am a singer song writer musician and poet I have written published recorded my work And received several awards I have been published in 20 International poetry books and received six Editor's Choice Awards one Accomplishment of Merit an International poet of Merit Award The 2012 International Who's Who in Poetry Award and Best Poets and Poem of 2012 Award I have been on the radio and have played music on stage with several well known blues musician's one of the biggest crowds I have played in front of was over five thousand people My home is in Minneapolis MN But most of all My family is my first passion and number one love more…

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