Analysis of The 9-5 Victim
Isn't it all wonderfully insane
The way we numb our pain
With false truths lined with the things of self worth, self indulgence and self gain
How we fail to realize
that the only real surprise
was that when you look into a dreamers eyes,
the limit lay far beyond the skies.
That a stoner obsessed
with spirituality could be put to the test
and when spoke to about life he could stand with the best,
but no.
Fall in line,
fall away
another bottle of beer or wine
just to face another day
animals have become of us, obsessed with pay,
with money and material things,
these concrete prisons bind us but our soul wishes to sing,
we are blind to the happiness and joy that freedom of shackles can bring.
Discard your memories because they are of a system
that chewed up and spat out people and would never learn to miss them,
for when we all become just another link in the chain, we realise that our lives were a product of self gain
the sun lies beyond your 9-5 desk where the inner doubt pours like rain.
Maybe one day we'll stop, and return to being human once again.
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Metre | 1011100001 0111101 11111011111010011 111110 1010101 11111010101 010110101 101001 100100111101 0111011111101 11 101 101 010101111 1110101 100101110111 110001001 101101111011011 111101000111011011 01110001111010 1110111001101111 111101101010011111010010111 011011110101111 10111100111010101 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,043 |
Words | 203 |
Sentences | 5 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 7, 12, 4, 1 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 35 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 211 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 51 |
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Submitted on August 04, 2017
Modified on March 05, 2023
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