Analysis of The 'Thought' Of The Creators Power



I had the thought briefly though today, of the huge
and expansive extent of our creators awesome power
this thought began somewhere from without and within
the organ of power which keeps me somewhat human.

As this organ is my 'brain' funny rhymes with train
and it seats multiple billions of cells all on together
I felt within that one short thought, the true views
of how my Father our Creator, would end human strife.

Who is 94 million miles away, my little brother the sun
and his connection to 'Dad' is visibly yet celestial
so you would think in your brains that if he was willed
his arched and super heated flames could be directed by
the thought of the one and only true Creator in heaven.

In a moment it takes you to realize a lung full of air
my Father's will and my Brother's whipping hot flares
could be focused, magnified, and directed towards and
through any two cities on earth! HEY! WAKE THE FRAK UP!


Scheme XAXB XAXX BXXXB XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 110110101101 0010011100101010 11011101001 0101101111110 111011110111 011100101111010 11011111011 111101001011101 11101011101001 010101111001010 111101111111 11010101110101 011010101010010 001011111001111 110101101011 1110100010010 1101101111011
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 900
Words 169
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 43
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 183
Words per stanza (avg) 42
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Michael Walker

61, Midwest USA, Veteran, ex-cop, writer (got a BA in film to be a better writer for the industry), poet, lyricist, just finished a sci-fi novella, working on a horror novella, waiting until after the November elections to do the final edit on a non-fiction book that's anti-politics and anti IRS - currently 444 pages. Did numerous positions with Live TV working with the Big 10 and ESPN - always liked Camera #4 position, right on the field with the action up close and personal. Soon to be a great grandfather. Damn... more…

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