Analysis of Sun



Sitting in the grass,
Looking up above,
Absorbing light just like a plant,
By staring at the sun.

Ball of fire blazing,
Hands clasping to pray,
In awe and wonder, crying out,
Worshiping the day.

With Kaleidoscopic eyes,
Blinking to see wild designs,
A cinema of abstract things,
Of rings and spots, of dots and strings,
Colors that no one has seen.

Boiling now like two egg yolks.
Scrambled.
And your skin is toast.
Black and burnt your eyeballs fry.
Blind.


Scheme XXXX XAXA XXBBX XXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 10001 10101 01011101 110101 111010 1111 01010101 101 111 1011101 01001011 11011101 1011111 1011111 10 01111 101111 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 440
Words 81
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 5
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on April 24, 2023

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B. M. Stroud

I am a writer/theatre director from Mentor, Ohio who creates formless, experimental work; each project might be radically different from what has gone before it. My prime aim is to create work which feeds the imaginations of young people and gives them a memorable reading experience. I am interested in developing a series of the most simplistic books for children aged 4 and older, rooted in the abstract, philosophical and existential.My Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100001420675472 more…

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