Analysis of Spring's Promise



Rise my children,..wake!
I bring Father's breath!
Raise your arms and take
His life into your death!

Rise my children,..grow!
Show your glory to all!
Cold sister northerly goes
And now I bring the thaw!

Rise my children,..bloom!
Paint brightly your faces!
Arrise from Mother's womb
And sing Father's praises!

Rise my children,..rejoice!
Father's love is eternal!
Raise to Him your voice
For your life is paternal!

Rise my children,..live!
Declare your presence here!
Drink in all Father gives
And I'll return again next year!

Tim I. Brumley


Scheme ABAB CXDX EFEF DGXG XCXC X
Poetic Form
Metre 111 11101 11101 110111 111 111011 1101001 011101 111 110110 11101 011010 111 1011010 11111 1111010 111 011101 101101 01010111 1110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 520
Words 93
Sentences 22
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 70
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted on March 15, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Timothy Ivan Brumley 061757

Born in Fort Worth Tx., June 17 of 57. High School Gladewater Tx., Class of 75. Four years active duty 1975-79, USAF spent in the far east, mainly Japan. Two years college at Tyler Jr. College, Tyler Tx. Three years working the oil fields of East Tx, 25 years in the heating and air industry. Presently retired and single. Divorced, and living alone for 9 years now, with three children, and two grand children. Living in Danielsville Georgia. Hobbies include music, antiques, poetry. more…

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