Analysis of Soft Heaven



Wonderful space in flickering stars.
Wonderful space in flickering stars.
The beauty of soft heaven.
The beauty of soft heaven.
The wonderful flickering beauty
of soft stars, space in heaven.

I blink inside the light of love.
I blink inside the light of love.
Watching time dance eons past.
Watching time dance eons past.
Inside time, the love of light,
past eons dance, watching, I blink.

Desire is a fingertip away.
Desire is a fingertip away.
With whispering smiles I gently reach.
With whispering smiles I gently reach.
I reach gently with a fingertip,
desire is whispering smiles away.

Wonderful heaven, a fingertip away,
smiles dance love, I blink
with the beauty of space, past eons.
Desire watching in flickering stars,
I gently reach inside of time,
the soft light is whispering.

The paradelle is one of the more demanding French fixed forms, first appearing in the langue d'oc love poetry of the 11th century. It is a poem of 4 6-line stanzas in which the 1st and 2nd as well as the 3rd and 4th lines of the first 3 stanzas must be identical. The 5th and 6th lines must use all the words from the preceding lines and only those words. The final stanza must use every word from all the preceding stanzas and only those words.


Scheme AABBxb CCDDxe FFGGxf fexaxx x
Poetic Form
Metre 100101001 100101001 0101110 0101110 010010010 1111010 11010111 11010111 1011101 1011101 0110111 11011011 010101001 010101001 110011101 110011101 11101010 0101100101 1001001001 11111 101011110 0101001001 11010111 0111100 011110101011110100011110010111001101011100101011110101111011011010001101111110110010101011010101110011100101001011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,210
Words 219
Sentences 21
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 196
Words per stanza (avg) 44
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Submitted on September 22, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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