Analysis of Soaring Over There



Soaring! the vision of you diving and floating with your mate high above the interstate gave my morning comute an arial ballet and countable moments of joy.

Connected in flight you two rose and fell like the heavy seas across the window of my ride. Daring, strong and like quicksilver I showed y'all off to my kids on way to office visit.

A broken body lay untouched for weeks your flightless days started by a driver on this lonely interstate leaving us with a pile of feathers me driving by in tears.  Your mate miss you as it searches without soaring.


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Poetic Form
Metre 10010111001011110100111101110101001011 01001111011010101010111101011101111111111010 01010101111101101010111001101101110110101111111100110
Characters 552
Words 101
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 148
Words per line (avg) 34
Letters per stanza (avg) 148
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted by nelson_j on March 25, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Nelson Jacobsen

dad|husband|servant w/cat|dog|mouse Founder @HelpEarthdotorg & @AltavozEntmt (that order) http://MusicCapitalist.com more…

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