Analysis of Sharing...
Love seems to be one breath away,
just out of reach,
yet its air is felt each day.
I stand one heart beat away,
feeling its serene life,
as I walk on a path,
through a forest of strife.
It amazes me who we are,
some near, some distantly far.
I can only speak for myself,
sharing the rolodex from my minds shelf.
The past I know longer need,
more important is the new planted seed.
Always watching as people grow,
learning there's so much more I need to know.
I know one day love will fill this heart,
untill then Jesus mends to whats been torn apart.
Forgiveness has set my being free,
unselfishness has allowed me to see.
Jesus gave me reasons to stay,
I pray you feel His love each breathing day.
Peace...
Scheme | AXA ABXB CCDD EEFF GGHH AAX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11111101 1111 1111111 1111101 101011 111101 101011 10101111 11111 1110111 100101111 0111101 1010101101 1101101 1011111111 111111111 11101101101 010111101 1101111 10111011 1111111101 1 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 686 |
Words | 136 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3 |
Lines Amount | 22 |
Letters per line (avg) | 25 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 91 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 23 |
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Submitted on July 10, 2014
Modified on March 05, 2023
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