Analysis of Senses



I still have your picture In my pocket
 So I can see you from time to time
 It sends me back to those days
 When we were doin just fine

I still smell your perfume
 It makes me feel like your here
 But now I'm wrapped in my cocoon
 Of depression and despair

I can still taste your lips on mine
 They say with time I'll be just fine
 But since you've left me here alone
 My broken heart has turned to stone

I still hear your words inside my head
 reminding me that I wish I was dead
 Without you I have no reason to live
 I have no more love to give

I still feel the warmth from your skin
 So soft and pale white like porcelain
 My heart has never let me feel much
 Until the day that I felt your touch

But now your gone and I'm all alone
 I really wish you could've stayed
 But I guess everyone must go home
 And meet their maker someday


Scheme XXXA XXXX AABB CCXX XXDD BXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111100110 111111111 1111111 110111 111101 1111111 11110101 1010001 11111111 11111111 11111101 11011111 111110111 0101111111 0111111011 1111111 11101111 110111100 111101111 010111111 111101101 11011001 11110111 011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 818
Words 171
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Submitted on February 13, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jacob Locke

I'm Jacob I'm 24 years old and really didn't realize I was into writing until I was about 20 years old and since then I've just been writing stuff that hits home with me I wanna write stuff that touches people hopefully I can succeed at that..... If you wanna know anything else just ask me more…

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