Analysis of Sacred Scriptures Ad #1



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Wrath by Professor Frost

He was born in melody only to get lost in dissonance
 Torn between rifts of happiness & aggression, he couldn't distance it
 Kevin use to be a happy child, not the angry man he is now to be known
 They say mental deterioration starts at home where it is nurtured & grown

10 years ago...
 He arrived home from a day of school, he was only in 7th grade
 His mother was a deep crack addict, the burden of stress weighed,
 Down his image, he would rue the time of the bell as school was finished
 It felt as if time had just relinquished him to a sanctuary where comfort diminished

It was eerie, cold & desolate on his block
 The same feeling in alone in a small room without a clock
 He slipped up the steps, the sky was gray, it began to rain
 He looked to the door, why was it was open? His heart began to pour pain

His heart was beating irregularly, out of place & time
 His small hand grasped the door's handle gingerly, hoping all was fine
 But, he knew something was suspicious the moment he witnessed,
 A pair of legs laying down behind the family couch, his stomach succumbed to sickness

He rushed to the back of the furniture & turned his mother's body over
 The foam was streaming out of her mouth slowly, he knew God had stole her
 The ambulance was called 20 minutes ago, still hadn't arrived
 He roared in anger, he was vindictive, certain she should still be alive

The paramedics didn't arrive till an half of hour later
 With his tears streaming he said,
 "YOU BASTARDS TOOK YOUR TIME TO GET HERE, YOU COULD HAVE SAVED HER!"
 Instead he prayed for her back every day, but unfortunately she was dead

10 years till present

Kevin is now on DeathRow for 6 counts of 1st degree murder
 He'd tell his psychologist,
 "My mother compelled my actions...in my head I heard her."
 But to the rest of the world she didn't exist

This was his vengeance on God & society, when pain & anger had to clash
 The wrath consumed his heart, the pace of hatred flowed through his blood too fast
 The 6 victims were crack dealers, in Kevin's eyes this was revenge to the exact
 But, why were the crack dealers dealing crack in the first place?
 The reality is wrath consumes us all, we take actions defying the law due to bitter tastes
 The world is a sinful place & life is full of tribulations which induce rage, that's for a fact


Scheme AX A XXBB XCCDD EEFF XXGX HHXX HIHI X HGHX XXJXXJ
Poetic Form
Metre 011101001110101 1110101101100111111010101100111110111011100101 110101 1110100101110100 10111100010110101 10111010110101111111 111001000111111101 101 10111011111100111 110101101010111 11101110110111110 1111111010110100110010 11101100111 011000100110101 11101011110111 111011111101101111 11110010001111 1111011010010111 111101010010110 0111101010100111001110 111011010011101010 01110110110111110 010011100111001 110101101010111101 0010100111111010 1111011 11011111111110 01111011001101000111 1110 10111111110110 1110100 110011111110 110110111001 111101101001110111 01011101110111111 0100110010111011001 11001101010011 01011011111100100111101 0110101111101010111101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 2,575
Words 490
Sentences 11
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 4, 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1, 4, 6
Lines Amount 39
Letters per line (avg) 52
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 184
Words per stanza (avg) 44
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Submitted by matiasp.29602 on December 04, 2014

Modified on April 26, 2023

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