Analysis of Sacred Scriptures Ad #1
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Wrath by Professor Frost
He was born in melody only to get lost in dissonance
Torn between rifts of happiness & aggression, he couldn't distance it
Kevin use to be a happy child, not the angry man he is now to be known
They say mental deterioration starts at home where it is nurtured & grown
10 years ago...
He arrived home from a day of school, he was only in 7th grade
His mother was a deep crack addict, the burden of stress weighed,
Down his image, he would rue the time of the bell as school was finished
It felt as if time had just relinquished him to a sanctuary where comfort diminished
It was eerie, cold & desolate on his block
The same feeling in alone in a small room without a clock
He slipped up the steps, the sky was gray, it began to rain
He looked to the door, why was it was open? His heart began to pour pain
His heart was beating irregularly, out of place & time
His small hand grasped the door's handle gingerly, hoping all was fine
But, he knew something was suspicious the moment he witnessed,
A pair of legs laying down behind the family couch, his stomach succumbed to sickness
He rushed to the back of the furniture & turned his mother's body over
The foam was streaming out of her mouth slowly, he knew God had stole her
The ambulance was called 20 minutes ago, still hadn't arrived
He roared in anger, he was vindictive, certain she should still be alive
The paramedics didn't arrive till an half of hour later
With his tears streaming he said,
"YOU BASTARDS TOOK YOUR TIME TO GET HERE, YOU COULD HAVE SAVED HER!"
Instead he prayed for her back every day, but unfortunately she was dead
10 years till present
Kevin is now on DeathRow for 6 counts of 1st degree murder
He'd tell his psychologist,
"My mother compelled my actions...in my head I heard her."
But to the rest of the world she didn't exist
This was his vengeance on God & society, when pain & anger had to clash
The wrath consumed his heart, the pace of hatred flowed through his blood too fast
The 6 victims were crack dealers, in Kevin's eyes this was revenge to the exact
But, why were the crack dealers dealing crack in the first place?
The reality is wrath consumes us all, we take actions defying the law due to bitter tastes
The world is a sinful place & life is full of tribulations which induce rage, that's for a fact
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Metre | 011101001110101 1110101101100111111010101100111110111011100101 110101 1110100101110100 10111100010110101 10111010110101111111 111001000111111101 101 10111011111100111 110101101010111 11101110110111110 1111111010110100110010 11101100111 011000100110101 11101011110111 111011111101101111 11110010001111 1111011010010111 111101010010110 0111101010100111001110 111011010011101010 01110110110111110 010011100111001 110101101010111101 0010100111111010 1111011 11011111111110 01111011001101000111 1110 10111111110110 1110100 110011111110 110110111001 111101101001110111 01011101110111111 0100110010111011001 11001101010011 01011011111100100111101 0110101111101010111101 |
Closest metre | Iambic octameter |
Characters | 2,575 |
Words | 490 |
Sentences | 11 |
Stanzas | 11 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 1, 4, 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1, 4, 6 |
Lines Amount | 39 |
Letters per line (avg) | 52 |
Words per line (avg) | 12 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 184 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 44 |
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