Analysis of Playing Musical Chairs



i know we met on line to see the lion king
musical in the heart of times square
i thought you were just a tourist but you said that no
you're from brooklyn and your mom and dad are right there
i probably shouldn't have hit on you but i had to
cause my heart was telling me, i might have a shot with you
i could tell you were from mississippi from your heavy accent
i swear to god i'm not a stalker ma'am, i'm not a mad man

i know its hard to trust a complete stranger
but don't you get bored with life? don't you need a little danger?
you said “you're such a silly son of sam” and please be silent
we're at a cafe and you're just disturbing the peace and quiet
i was wondering what books you read and then you said
“oh i'm reading about the wicked witch of the west”
you were so into your book that i had to wonder
when would i get a chance to ask for your number

i go out on my usual routine and to my surprise i see your face
in a crowd of hipsters and yuppies at the usual hot spot cafe
you were sitting there alone reading your morning paper
i know that had to be columbian coffee, only the best to savour
i walked on by staring casually but actually i was mesmerized
by your feline face, your divine body and how could i forget those eyes
feeling a little nervous and i know its a long shot but i had to ask you for a date
and you said “sure, how bout a walk in the park and then have dinner, “it's a wonderful day”

i know getting to know each other can be so very awkward
it's like little kids trying to scribble nonsense onto chalkboards
but things will get better and better as we get along with the weather
like you could meet my dog max and i could meet your cat heather
for such ordinary civilians, we have such weird idiosyncrasies
i wish i could read your mind so i can see what you think of me
we're just like two odd balls trying to fit into a small square
trying to find a place in this world playing musical chairs


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Poetic Form
Metre 111111110101 100001111 1110101011111 111001101111 11001011111111 11111011110111 111101010111001 111111010111011 11111100110 111111111101010 111101011101110 1100101101001010 1110011110111 1110010101101 1010111111110 111101111110 1111110001011011111 00111010101001101 10101011011010 11111110010100111 111110100011001110 11111011001110111 10010100111011111111101 0111110100101110101001 1110111101111010 111011011010101 111110010111011010 111111101111110 11100010111100010 1111111111111111 111111101101011 101101011101001
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,914
Words 393
Sentences 3
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 47
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 377
Words per stanza (avg) 98
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Submitted on November 23, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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