Analysis of Pickles



Now that I'm twenty,
I beat pickle jars open with big knives.
I slam slabs into their hats,
and when they open,
I'm happy.
When I was little, my dad used pickles to let ME be the hero.
When HE would try to open the jar,
his veins would bulge out blue.
But I would just smile
and twist them off.

And I believed him.

When my parents fell out of love,
My mom stopped buying those pickles,
at least the ones I could slide open.
Now I pound and beat pickles open.
I see others beating their jars open.
I miss twisting them off.
My child will twist open our pickle jars,
and the dents in their hats will never be seen.


Scheme AXXBAXXXXC X XXBBBCXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11110 1110110111 1110111 01110 110 11110111101111010 111111001 111111 11111 0111 01011 11101111 11110110 110111110 111011010 1110101110 111011 11111010101 00101111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 594
Words 123
Sentences 11
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 10, 1, 8
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 156
Words per stanza (avg) 41
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on April 21, 2023

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