Analysis of Perfumed Imagination



There are exciting, intricate thoughts of you inside me,
entering perfumed imagination with wet surprise,
flirting with this exquisite attention, I smile with love.

I will write for the tune of lady romance where I dance,
yes, cover my delicate feet with the scent that's so sweet,
fall in delight and bury my head in heavenly breasts.

Sometimes I let cruel doubt cover explosions in my chest,
thinking strange thoughts of your fine-lined beauty so far away,
they strangle erratic joy with: is this a pipedream lost.

But then, the wonderful collision of our soul-touch comes
as I long for the sticky strawberry kiss wrapping up
everything I own in the gift: especially for you.

I could shout desire louder and cry in a locked embrace,
wander good-God health as I dream of your cool lithe body
there in blue battles, strike wildly the victorious blow.

Soft spiralled artwork you are, staring, squaring these dark eyes
as dangerous glances sweep yours in moments of escape,
come closer and feel all the passionate strokes which paint us.


Scheme ABX XXX XXX XXX XAX BXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11010100111011 1000100101101 10111000101111 11110111001111 11011001101111 10010101101001 011110110010011 10111111101101 1100101111011 110100010110111 1111010101101 101100101011 111010100100101 10111111111110 10110110001001 111111010111 11001011010101 11001101001111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,018
Words 176
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 46
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 139
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Submitted on June 04, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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