Analysis of Painted Sky



Paint the sky with sadness,sorrow and tears
Ocean upon ocen bear the love songs
Of the Great Bear
Addressing the desire and distress of my Prayers
Liquefying selves
Fluids in shells
Melts,melts,melts
Uniting you and me
In liquid flames

The silk in your teeth
Find channel in the Chalice of
your heaven-hid-honeyed-lips
Your love-lake overflows then with the
eden-hidden-love-swings
Drowing my Albatross-omened ill-fated seamen
Deep,deep in the unfathomable Depth
Of Life`s births,deaths!!!


Scheme AXXAXXAXX XXXXXXXA
Poetic Form
Metre 1011101 100111011 1011 0100010001111 11 1001 1 010101 0101 01011 11000101 110111 11110110 101011 1110111010 100010001 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 473
Words 77
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 9, 8
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 201
Words per stanza (avg) 36
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on May 04, 2023

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