Analysis of Our Love Will Last Forever



The time that I met and know you
I think of you in everything that I do
In every songs that I sing,
I sing it for you.
In every tune that I hum...
I remember your charm.
In every lines that I read,
I remember what you said.

You came into my life...
Just in time when I needed you most.
When I needed my rainbow to shine,
You came and color it on time.
I have no doubt my life with you, will be fine.
You know why I said these?
Because I trust your love and promises.

But last night honey, I cried.
My heart beats fast I can't deny.
The love we have is just a week away.
It's still young, fragile, and tender like a baby.
Then, I think of you and worry so much.
And I remember...
"How can I sing the song...
when leaving you I'll be out of tune?"
"How can I hum the rest of the lines...
when the lyrics are broken and not fine?"

I wake up this morning and think it over again.
If our love is pure and true,
It will stand the test of time.
Arguments and fights are just spices of life
With all the trials and test,
It will keep us stays strong.
No matter how rough the wind blows,
With enough love, faith, respect and trust,
I believe our love will never go wrong.
So Honey, respect, trust and believe... Let's have faith that our love will last forever!


Scheme AAXAXXBB CXDEDXX XXXXXFGXXD XAECXGXXGF
Poetic Form
Metre 01111011 1111010111 01001111 11111 01001111 101011 01001111 1010111 110111 101111011 11101111 11010111 11111111111 111111 0111110100 1111011 11111101 0111110101 111100101010 1111101011 01010 111101 110111111 111101101 1010110011 1111100111001 11011101 1110111 10001111011 1101001 111111 11011011 101110101 10110111011 110011001111110111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,218
Words 257
Sentences 27
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 7, 10, 10
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 234
Words per stanza (avg) 64
Font size:
 

Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:17 min read
3

Discuss this gee_gall poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Our Love Will Last Forever" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 8 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/81267/our-love-will-last-forever>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    More poems by

    gee_gall

    »

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    23
    days
    19
    hours
    45
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Which of these poets did not use capital letters in his works?
    A Robert Frost
    B Robert Browning
    C E.E. Cummings
    D Sylvia Plath