Analysis of Orietta Song
Today your brown eyes sneak in my pockets to hide from my desire.
Your black hair comb through my surprise faster my step.
Please stop my gaze from shimmering from your lips.
The legs which you have, move in my wind.
I look for my tears when I walk by your side,
Tabled by my search when your lost from my thoughts,
Serene is my enemy when you walk from my distance.
Sleep jump from life, when I look for your hand.
Out of your chest, staged for tonight.
This shatter is crippled by hope and dampen by the cuddle of your walk,
Tackling with the watchful look of your touch,
Bevy with the stain from your lips.
Will I see the eyes that provoked my obsession.
Look for me when you dream of tomorrow and you wish for today.
My escape is your loving touch, dress with your kind stare.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 01111101101111010 111111011011 11111100111 011111011 11111111111 10111111111 01111001111110 1111111111 11111101 110110110101010111 1010101111 10101111 111011011010 111111101011101 1011110111111 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 767 |
Words | 151 |
Sentences | 12 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 3 |
Lines Amount | 15 |
Letters per line (avg) | 41 |
Words per line (avg) | 10 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 153 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 38 |
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Submitted on May 01, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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