Analysis of One Beautiful Day



Today is so beautiful to me, I can almost see you clearly. Even as the day turns into night, I emotionally feel you near me to help me be above criminal minded, not blinded,"and you have kept me strong and I'm doing it all on my own. I can hear you calling my name in the mist of it all just to help me lift my devolution from the abhorred emotions.

Today is so beautiful to me, I speck my mind to say who am I to create these felling that run so deep inside that will make the boldest of us all remember that painful, unbelievable day that my oldest has went own to the other side of the wall. I can barley see you know I hope your doing okay as for me I'm just thankful for each beautiful day.


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Characters 694
Words 143
Sentences 5
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 1
Lines Amount 2
Letters per line (avg) 270
Words per line (avg) 71
Letters per stanza (avg) 270
Words per stanza (avg) 71
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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