Analysis of On my way ..




On my Way ….
I  am on my way
to the foot hills of the mountain,
I am on my way
to the countryside village and rain…

I am on my way to the nature's lap,
Where the world would sing for me & would clap
The water of the spring and the thatched houses there
The quite environment prevailing …that is so rare..

The birds definitely   would sing for me
The river water would flow and kiss the sea ,
The flowers would bloom and butterflies fly around
That black cloud  , lightning and the frightening  roaring sound

I would love to watch the nature so near
And would eagerly enjoy the village care

Oh God…. Hold them all for me please ,
 I am on my way ….
                           I am on my way …….


Scheme aaxAx bbcc ddee xc xAA
Poetic Form
Metre 111 11111 10111010 11111 10101001 1111110101 101111111 010101001101 0101000101111 0110001111 01010110101 01011010101 1111000100101 1111101011 01100010101 11111111 11111 11111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 691
Words 133
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 2, 3
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 101
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted on August 27, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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