Analysis of Ojo ni ibadan (rain ni ibadan)



Now the tide has come,
Our barns will be filled and orchards bloom
Engagement lists cheaper and more maize whistlers,
With our very God given cool interruption from the heat

Yes the tide has come again,
May it sweep clean and wash our filths away,
We do not have fountains so we wait on you,
“Careful now how you block my way,” says Òjò.

Have we not heard of your exploits?
You limbless, wavy, mighty which shakes foundations,
Houses doff their roof top hats in absolute submission,
And great men with you are swept off their feet.

Did we not hear of the eighties' and the year eleven,
How fleets ceased and flowed in your torrent,
Great oaks mourning, reluctant to bow,
Were brought to their knees, never to stand

Fathers separated from their children,
Amateurs and experts forced to race in a borderless pool,
Without safety kits nor guards in view to rescue,
And mothers only content to find bodies of their loved ones.

And what have we learned of your dealings
We still wait on you to bear our dirts
Whithersoever you will, so long as it is far away
And still we pray for safety from the tide


Scheme XXAB XCDC XEFB FXXX FXDE XACX
Poetic Form
Metre 10111 1011110101 01011001110 110101101010101 1011101 11110110101 11111011111 1011111111 1111111 110101011010 1011111010010 0111111111 11111010001010 111010110 111001011 011111011 101001110 100101110011 011011101110 010101011101111 011111110 1111111101 11111111101 0111110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,091
Words 203
Sentences 5
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 147
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted on April 06, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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