Analysis of O,god accept my humble submission



O, ask not my heart, ask my mind
That kept awakened even in sleep
And talked to some unknown insight
Some angelic spirit that did brought
A heart so calm and temper so deep
To cope alone in the thorny world
With prickling eyes and sarcastic expressions
Of hatred, jealousy and hostility
On every success did it taste
The bitterness of the sarcasm
And the seething looks in the eyes
Of the so called friends
Who I believe made my way easy
To be more patient, wise and blessed
 That otherwise I could have never been
So I thank   all the friendly foes
Who envied on my being fortunate
Instead of working on their own self
And counting the blessings they owned
Never mind, my heart is all praise for God
Who bestowed me with countless bliss
And wealth of mind and heart
O, God! Let me offer my honest gratitude
And accept my humble submission


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 816
Words 156
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 674
Words per stanza (avg) 158
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Submitted on October 07, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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