Analysis of O,god accept my humble submission
O, ask not my heart, ask my mind
That kept awakened even in sleep
And talked to some unknown insight
Some angelic spirit that did brought
A heart so calm and temper so deep
To cope alone in the thorny world
With prickling eyes and sarcastic expressions
Of hatred, jealousy and hostility
On every success did it taste
The bitterness of the sarcasm
And the seething looks in the eyes
Of the so called friends
Who I believe made my way easy
To be more patient, wise and blessed
That otherwise I could have never been
So I thank all the friendly foes
Who envied on my being fortunate
Instead of working on their own self
And counting the blessings they owned
Never mind, my heart is all praise for God
Who bestowed me with countless bliss
And wealth of mind and heart
O, God! Let me offer my honest gratitude
And accept my humble submission
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Metre | 11111111 110101001 0111011 11010111 011101011 110100101 1110010010 11010000100 110001111 01001010 00101001 10111 110111110 11110101 110111101 11110101 1101110100 011101111 01001011 1011111111 10111101 011101 11111011010 001110010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 816 |
Words | 156 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 24 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 674 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 158 |
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Submitted on October 07, 2013
Modified on March 05, 2023
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