Analysis of Nela



Hey sweet enchantress arti, ukasayer wrong kano nil?
Neela why the color of the sky is blue?
Nelam arti kano amaye cadaey sara rath,sara
din?
Nelam why Arti makes me cry all day,all nite
Neela ukasayer wrong kano nil?
Neela have you yet witnessed the soft parade
Of desire in moonlit dreams?Neela are you
born yet?Have you yet experienced Pain,
Pleasure and Prem?Neela have you ever seen
the slow progression of Sin across the stary
Sky of watery dreams?Nelam Arti is uniQue
She prefers cremation than burial;death to
dreams;happiness to sadness;marriage 2 extra
marital bliss!Nela,why I`m so unfeeling?
My wings are numb;my eyes are blown-in-the
wind-tulips;Neela have you born yet?Have you
Yet seen sin or the Pain that multiply by
the lover`s grin;Nela,nela,Nela rain drops
soft & swift mixing my tears of bereavement,beliefs!


Scheme ABCDEAFBGHCIBCJKBLMM
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 111111101 1101010111 111011101 1 111111111 111101 1111100101 101001111 111101001 100111101 010101101010 1110011101 101010111 11110 100111010 111111100 1111111 1111011101 01111 11101111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 810
Words 151
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 667
Words per stanza (avg) 133
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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