Analysis of Neelum Valley



Days it took
Down slopes, goat-tracks, gullies.
Of resting
Under autumn sky, leafless trees, by boulders.
Days with no food.
Water only from the mountain springs.
For days
I carried her
On my hands like an offering
With others bearing their wounded
Bruised, scarred, broken limbs
On string cots, cotton-sheet stretchers.
The village collapsed on itself
Like steam puffed chapatti on the griddle.
My aunt's shawl bright
With flowers of summer pastures
Was dust-soiled, torn like her.
We buried the dead.


Scheme ABCDEFGHCIJDKLMDHN
Poetic Form
Metre 111 111110 110 10101101110 1111 101010101 11 1100 11111100 11010110 11101 11110110 01001101 1111101 1111 11011010 111110 11001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 485
Words 81
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 402
Words per stanza (avg) 81
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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