Analysis of Nathan.



I almost lost you, love of mine.
Like a feather in the breeze, you were almost gone.
The time without you was an empty time,
I knew surely- I'd never move on.
I couldn't bear to think of how to forget,
when it wasn't our choices that forced us apart.
It was the voices of others- their ideas set,
convinced that I wasn't good for your heart.
Finally though- the voices stopped,
allowed us a reunion- as sweet as can be.
Now you and I are back together,
and you are the world to me.
Those days, so recent, will soon be but a bitter memory,
although in honesty they brought me to the brink.
I know our future's waiting, so much we can't forsee,
but as long as you're with me I can't wait for it to begin.
So Nathan; you're my future,you help erase my past.
Nathan; you're my first love and you will be my last.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 10100011011 0101111101 111011011 11011111101 1110101011101 1101011010101 0111101111 10010101 011001011111 110111010 0110111 111101111010100 10100111101 11101010111101 111111111111101 11011110111 101111011111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 791
Words 160
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 610
Words per stanza (avg) 159
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Submitted on October 16, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Sophie Roberts

EMAIL ME AT sofisweetie@hotmail.com or add me on facebook for info on my other writing! https://www.facebook.com/SophieLarrrrrMarieMy name is Sophie Marie Roberts. I'm nearly 20 years old and I live in Wrexham, North Wales. I write poetry because it's one of the things that comes naturally. When I was a child I would try to write a diary like everyone else my age but I ended up with a book of poetry. I find it the easiest way to express what is happening in my mind too (which, in some cases, worries me- since my poetry is rather bizzare!) I don't have any diploma's, certificates or qualifications that tell me I should write but I write anyway. I hope people like my poetry- but I know it won't be everyone's cup of tea- but I hope it's yours. ALSO; PLEASE BE AWARE THAT ALLTHOUGH I WROTE 'THIS POEM MEANS' UNDERNEATH MY POEMS- I'M MERELY STATING WHAT IT MEANT IN MY HEAD. PLEASE INTERPRET MY POETRY HOWEVER YOU WISH. http://www.booksie.com/mystery_and_crime/short_story/inksplodges/bitter-freedom/chapter/1 < one of my short stories. more…

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