Analysis of NataLisa perfection
Could she, should she, could I, should I,
girl I met awhile back, with interesting proposal,
if I would be a master sculptor, she would be a shape I chisel,
I be chiseling to perfection, show all I am not lying, to a final admiration,
once I finish my masterpiece, without a breath I start another,
until I plaster this rock, as far as eye can see,
if I would be a master painter, I would brush away a new masterpiece,
me think call it NataLisa,
hung it on my wall, and stair at it for all eternity,
and as far as her perfection, I keep it all to my wholesome self.
©malenky malenky
6/30/2014
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11111111 1110111100010 11110101011101110 11100101011111101010010 1110110010111010 0111011111111 111101010111010110 11111 111110111110100 01110010111111101 11 1 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 586 |
Words | 115 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 10, 2 |
Lines Amount | 12 |
Letters per line (avg) | 38 |
Words per line (avg) | 10 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 227 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 58 |
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Submitted on August 21, 2014
Modified on March 05, 2023
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