Analysis of NataLisa perfection



Could she, should she, could I, should I,
girl I met awhile back, with interesting proposal,
if I would be a master sculptor, she would be a shape I chisel,
 I be chiseling to perfection, show all I am not lying, to a final admiration,
once I finish my masterpiece, without a breath I start another,
until I plaster this rock, as far as eye can see,
 if I would be a master painter, I would brush away a new masterpiece,
me think call it NataLisa,
 hung it on my wall, and stair at it for all eternity,
 and as far as her perfection, I keep it all to my wholesome self.

©malenky malenky
6/30/2014


Scheme XAAXXBXBBX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 1110111100010 11110101011101110 11100101011111101010010 1110110010111010 0111011111111 111101010111010110 11111 111110111110100 01110010111111101 11 1
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 586
Words 115
Sentences 2
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 10, 2
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 227
Words per stanza (avg) 58
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Submitted on August 21, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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