Analysis of My Subliminal Image



I see all my life ...though eyes are closed
when asked my thoughts ...I supposed,
When asked for truth ...you have my voice
what of opinions ...you have your choice.

My thoughts when written ...no-one hears me
your eyes are opened ...yet you can't see,
I lost my heart ...my soul went too
now you discard It ...what shall I do.

I know you hear me ...though you play deaf
Feel your heart beating ...feel I no breath,
your kiss from heaven ...when on the ground
If I am lost ...with you I'm found.

You're by my side ...when far away
I almost left ...you asked please stay,
Know what I'm thinking ...I see your eyes
I know that smile ...now no goodbyes.

Bobby Ferguson 2013.


Scheme AABB CCDD XXEE FFGG X
Poetic Form
Metre 111111111 1111101 11111111 110101111 111101111 111101111 11111111 110111111 111111111 111101111 111101101 11111111 11111101 1111111 111101111 1111111 10100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 655
Words 126
Sentences 22
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Bobby Ferguson

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