Analysis of My Shoelaces



Whenever I am in space
I wish I was back on the base
Cause I can never tie my shoelace
Up here in space
Tying my shoe is like a race
With all these strings, chaos is taking place
As I calm down to get on pace,
I finally tie my shoe with grace..


Scheme AAAAAAAA
Poetic Form Monorhyme
Metre 0101101 11111101 11110111 1101 10111101 1111101101 11111111 110011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 237
Words 54
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 187
Words per stanza (avg) 54
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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