Analysis of My Journey Has Just Begun

Rusty SA Taylor 1954 (California)



Though life for me on Mother Earth is
through, there is much I need to do. The Great
One called me to his side, his wishes I will
abide. He will help remove the pain from your
hearts, it was time for us to part. I send my
tears so the flowers will grow. I send my
eyes so the stars will glow. Know my children
I loved you, I was proud to watch you grow.
Love me enough to let me go. Watch for me in
the spring as the flowers grow. See me in the
summer as the warm sun glows. Watch for me in
winter, as I twinkle in the sky, or when like
the moon I rise. I will be everywhere,
helping the Great One shed despair, giving
hope to those that need a dream, those that
the world has forgotten it would seem. My
children, it is OK to miss me for a while, but
know the Great One calls me to his Isle to
create the path for ones who have lost their
smile, who need a hand through life's trial.


Scheme ABCDEEFGHIHJKLMENOKP
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 111111011 1111111101 11111111011 01111010111 11111111111 1101011111 1101111110 1111111111 110111111110 01101011100 10101111110 101110001111 011111110 1001110110 111110111 0110101111 1011111111011 1011111111 0101111111 111011110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 865
Words 187
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 673
Words per stanza (avg) 187
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Submitted on March 20, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Rusty SA Taylor

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