Analysis of My Colorful Destination



MY COLORFUL DESTINATION
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 When I first saw you
 You look like the queen of beauty
 I knew my Venus,
 You will fall in love with me
 And yours eyes will glide
 On my lush green body

Every time I see your eyes
 The garden becomes more colorful
 and the cypress tree of my mind
 Erect more powerful

Before you came into my life
 My world was full of imagination
 My friend was colorful destination
 My soul was flying in acceleration

We became one on our union
 As the mixture of dew mist in cloud
 The music started playing a bit loud
 We sung and dance in eternal motion

Before you came into my life
 I only loved you in my dreams
 I didn't know anything about you
 I only believed one day you will come

And our soul will unite to become one
 Today  thatday has come to become one

~~~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~~~


Scheme a bcxcxc xdxd Eaaa affa Exbx aa x
Poetic Form
Metre 1100010 1 11111 11101110 11110 1110111 01111 111110 10011111 010011100 00101111 011100 01110111 111110010 111100010 111100010 101111010 101011101 0101010011 1101001010 01110111 11011011 110110011 1100111111 0101111011 011111011 110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 807
Words 154
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 8, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2, 1
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on August 21, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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