Analysis of The Watch on Deck



Becalmed upon the equatorial seas,
   A ship of gold lay on a sea of fire;
   Each sail and rope and spar, as in desire,
Mutely besought the kisses of a breeze;
Low laughter told the mariners at ease;
   Sweet sea-songs hymned the red sun's fun'ral pyre:
   Yet One, with eyes that never seemed to tire,
Watched for the storm, nursed on the thunder's knees.

Thou watcher of the spirit's inner keep,
Scanning Death's lone, illimitable deep,
   Spread outward to the far immortal shore!
While the vault sleeps, from the upheaving deck,
Thou see'st the adamantine reefs that wreck,
   And Life's low shoals, where lusting billows roar.


Scheme ABBAABBA CCDEED
Poetic Form
Metre 0101001001 01111101110 11010110010 11010101 1101010011 1111011110 11111101110 110111011 1101010101 101111 1101010101 10111011 11101111 0111110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 640
Words 108
Sentences 4
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 6
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 241
Words per stanza (avg) 53
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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