Analysis of My Beating heart



My Beating heart, calls out for thee.
My Tears, blind me I cannot see
Please Return, Like the snow
I never thought youd ever go

now left, And So alone
I am Chilled, to the very bone
But warmed by these my tears
Facing off, with my deepest fears

Your finals words, how I go on
They are how I make it to the dawn.
"Live life, even after the end,
For truly, with dreams, No end"

You smiled as you slipped, away
I cry I cry, why couldnt you stay
I know, that I must see the light
You are the vanquisher, of my night.


Scheme AABB CCXX XXDD EEFF
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 11011111 11111101 101101 11011101 110101 11110101 111111 10111101 11011111 111111101 11101001 1101111 1111101 11111111 11111101 1101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 497
Words 106
Sentences 3
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Keith Brest

Poetry, is not my hobby. It Is my passion. I began admiring it through Mr.Poe himself, and I took his sense of authenticity. So I crafted my own type of poetry. I try to break away from how everyone else sounds. more…

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