Analysis of memorable when R.I.P



a great magnificent colorful earthly tomb
a remembering of an old sweet melody & lofty tune
forsaken lilys & daisies under the sun out in a dune

for memory is forever unlike the presentation which is gone to soon
it washes away the moment into an experience made for you
part of the one thing that's remembered after death
 a soulful hue

fighting time from taking the precious greetings of people much
so fine are the first time meetings of the Times as such
the feeling of discovering gold in the forest on a dream or a hunch

visiting ancient accomplishments or walking through open furnishments
as we glide through this vegetation we fleshy firmaments
as the infinite spirit and finite body are divided to be used in pointless arguments


Scheme XAA ABXB CCX DDD
Poetic Form
Metre 010100100101 001001111100101 01011010011001 1100101001001011111 110010100110100111 110111010101 0101 101110010101101 1110111010111 0101010010010101101 1001001001101101 111110101101 101001001101010111010100
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 726
Words 130
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 3, 3
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 47
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 151
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Submitted on August 15, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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