Analysis of A Baby Asleep after Pain

David Herbert Lawrence 1885 (Eastwood, Nottinghamshire) – 1930 (Vence)



As a drenched, drowned bee  
Hangs numb and heavy from a bending flower,  
 So clings to me  
My baby, her brown hair brushed with wet tears  
 And laid against her cheek;
Her soft white legs hanging heavily over my arm  
Swinging heavily to my movements as I walk.  
 My sleeping baby hangs upon my life,  
Like a burden she hangs on me.  
 She has always seemed so light,
But now she is wet with tears and numb with pain  
Even her floating hair sinks heavily,  
 Reaching downwards;  
As the wings of a drenched, drowned bee  
 Are a heaviness, and a weariness.


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 10111 11010101010 1111 1100111111 010101 0111101001011 101001110111 1101010111 10101111 111111 11111110111 1001011100 1010 10110111 10100100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 558
Words 103
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 421
Words per stanza (avg) 101
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 27, 2023

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David Herbert Lawrence

David Herbert Lawrence was an English writer and poet. His collected works represent, among other things, an extended reflection upon the dehumanising effects of modernity and industrialisation. Lawrence's writing explores issues such as sexuality, emotional health, vitality, spontaneity, and instinct. Lawrence's opinions earned him many enemies and he endured official persecution, censorship, and misrepresentation of his creative work throughout the second half of his life, much of which he spent in a voluntary exile he called his "savage pilgrimage". At the time of his death, his public reputation was that of a pornographer who had wasted his considerable talents. E. M. Forster, in an obituary notice, challenged this widely held view, describing him as "the greatest imaginative novelist of our generation." Later, the literary critic F. R. Leavis championed both his artistic integrity and his moral seriousness. more…

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