Analysis of Love is only concern



Love is only concern
That waits good turn
Real feelings for our brethrens
Deprived, hungry and downtrodden

I always pray
And sincerely pay
Respect to even children
As it is purely driven

Heart always weeps
And pain keeps
To worry about for those
Who are having no access?

I have meals twice a day
That keeps hunger at the bay
I have found peaceful way
To ask near by poor children how are they?

I find satisfaction
With close bond and relation
That by my little action
They offer happiness and no reaction

Why are we so unfortunate?
One of little boy asked me to relate
“No you are best among loved”
“God has always thought and believed”

I find beautiful place
Where almighty has made it at ease
Why should we create hell?

When everything is smooth and going well


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 744
Words 141
Sentences 5
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3, 1
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 77
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted on October 10, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Hasmukh Mehta

am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I hold technical qualification like Diploma in Radio/engineering .I have done English and Hindi stenography as well. I had mastered the art in Morse telephony too. I am associated with several welfare organizations and served long time as Union leader too. I am at present working as hobby writer. I write poems on various subjects and invite suggestions from all the quarters. I have written one memoir named “As I see it” and ready for publication. One interesting part of writing I would love to share with all my reader friends. I am not sure weather it may be the same case with all as I do not want to be caught in any controversy. When I sit on my personal computer, there is absolutely no thought in mind as to what is to be picked up as thought and written. These all things I leave it to the discretion of almighty to fill my mind with relevant ideas. So far I have been graced by Him and as result able to compose about 4000 poems. I have be awarded with 4 achievement award from the www.ezinearticles.com for successfully meeting with their standard. I am writing on many sites so as to be associated with reader friends all over the world. I am thankful to all those who have supported me in my initial days. more…

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