Analysis of Love in Secrecy
under the dark sky and constellations of stars,
we lie on this grass away from all the noise of the cars.
comfortably, we try to rest our weary hearts
tonight, we take the joys and leave the lonely parts.
it feels good to be next to you and hear your voice
you speak to me as if you're communicating with my soul.
I guess that falling in love tonight is not a choice,
but a feeling that I just cannot hold back, I just can't control..
I'll forget our possibilities because I know it's impossible.
they only exist in my dreams, I can't tell you- you make me whole.
and so I guess I just have to take a chance granted me
by God Who knows that I've always loved you in secrecy..
you fall asleep, I still love your eyes though closed.
I'm crazy about your eyes and I guess nobody knows.
I faint inside everytime you wake and your eyes look for me
you think that I'd leave but no, I'm just here watching you sleep.
I wonder why am I so scared if my love is just so pure and sincere..
It's just so real and true, I know I've no reasons to fear.
but I still can't tell you how much you mean to me..
I can't even make a good look at you when you look back at me.
I realized, this is love and it's just so real..
Probably, it's a good way to understand and feel
that true love does exist like it's happening to me..
Yes, I'm drowning here in this deep emotion sea..
and you're not aware of what you do to me
as you fall asleep next to the one who loves you in secrecy.
Scheme | AABB CDCD XDEE XXEX FFEE GGEEEE |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 10011001011 11111011101101 1000111110101 011101010101 111111110111 11111110100111 1111001011101 1010111101111101 101100100011110100 1100101111111111 01111111101101 1111111110100 11011111111 110011101111 11011011011111 11111111111011 110111111111111001 11110111111011 111111111111 1110101111111111 11011101111 100101110101 1111011110011 111010110101 01101111111 1110111011110100 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 1,434 |
Words | 295 |
Sentences | 18 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 6 |
Lines Amount | 26 |
Letters per line (avg) | 43 |
Words per line (avg) | 11 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 185 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 49 |
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Submitted on August 31, 2013
Modified on March 17, 2023
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