Analysis of Love in Paradise!



You are like a bird in the sky.
You could of had this love in paradise?
But you chose the other side of your world.
I could of been your angel with wide wings
that could with wide wings that could of
wrap around you.If you love me,you should
of sent me some kind of sign by now.Miracles
could Happen? You should't be a shame of
this paradise. What's stopping us from
being together.The sun is bright the moon
shows light stars in the heaven all aroun'd
us make it right.When I'm in my room do
lot of crying for you,but sometime I think
you don't care if I crying or not I don't
know Lord help me please.Sometime I tried
not to Love you but it's very hard for me
I can't stop Love you. You are my world?
your my paradise in my night? I can't let
go of you? I tried to let you go and stop
love you but the love l have for you is stonger.


Scheme ABCDEFBEGHCIJKLMCNOP
Poetic Form
Metre 11101001 111111010 1110101111 1111110111 11111111 10111111 111111111 1101111011 11011011 10111101 111001011 111110111 111011111 11111101111 1111111 11111110111 111111111 1110011111 11111111101 11101111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 816
Words 178
Sentences 15
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 639
Words per stanza (avg) 171
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Submitted on January 15, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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