Analysis of Lost in the Dark



I sit here alone
lost in the dark.
My soul is caught up
in a high cliff wall
waiting to descend
to the waiting rocks below.

I know there are things
that I cannot change
but nevertheless I
continue the struggle
to find peace and happiness.

Long ago, I was told
that if I waited
good things would come to me.
How long must I wait
lost in the dark?


Scheme xAxxxx xxxxx xxxxA
Poetic Form
Metre 11101 1001 11111 00111 10101 1010101 11111 11101 10011 010010 1110100 101111 11110 111111 11111 1001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 330
Words 70
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 5
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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