Analysis of long way back tome
she always has some where to go every night when she walks out the door
she thinks that i really don't know where she goe's
but it's for the better that don't let her know
she needs me in her life so much and she knows
but shes done every thing to make me go
And I know that she is so board to death with me
that lately ive been so lost in her future of ease to be
she doesn't know how alone that alone can be
but I do I'm a expert she taught it to me
and the hurt she make's me feel keep's on cutting so deep
I wonder if she knows it's a long way back to me
some time's it get's so far you can barely see
and I know that in her life she has been cut real deep
because ive rescued her from that place where she goe's to weep
she spends most days with tears in her eyes so sad
and lately it's gone from worse to bad
she doe's not know how alone alone can be
when your so far away that you can barely see
I just wish she would spend one night alone with me
before she get's so far she can never see
Scheme | ABCBCDDDDEDBEEFFDBDB |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (20%) |
Metre | 11111111001111101 11111011111 11101011101 11100111011 11110011111 011111111111 110111100101111 110110110111 111101011111 0011111111011 1101111011111 11111111101 0111001111111 01110011111111 11111100111 010111111 11111010111 111101111101 111111110111 01111111101 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 978 |
Words | 217 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 20 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 38 |
Words per line (avg) | 11 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 765 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 218 |
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Submitted on February 21, 2017
Modified on March 05, 2023
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