Analysis of Lonely Dancer



She walks across the empty floor
As though the world has ended
Another night has made it's rounds
She still goes unbefriended

Her Dress, she will save
For another night
Then wear it, as though it were new
Besides, tonight it wasn't seen by many
In fact, by very few

Oh, she tried to show herself off
In her own, very common manner
By walking back, and forth continually
As though she were carrying a banner

She never danced, but only watched
As she sat, in her own little corner
Lost, in a world of unconcern
A world, where she is a loner

The lights are out, the music hushed
And now, her world begins
A world of dreams, and everywhere
The sound of violins

The music comes, from across the clouds
Floating, softly in her ear
And just for a moment, soaring up high
Her heart has no fear

Then tears come quietly, across her cheek
In her dreams, she is such a romancer
Yet, on this cold, and empty floor
She is just a lonely dancer

Jack Richards
 www.whatifisit@yahoo.com


Scheme ABXB XXCDC XEDE XEXE XFXF XXXX XAAE XX
Poetic Form
Metre 11010101 1101110 01011111 1111 01111 10101 11111101 01011101110 011101 11111011 001101010 11010101000 1110100010 11011101 1110011010 1001101 01111010 01110101 010101 0111010 011001 010110101 1010001 0110101011 01111 1111000101 00111101 11110101 11101010 110 11
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 938
Words 183
Sentences 3
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 95
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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