Analysis of Loathing Example



A glowing example of human perfection
Slight of body, nimble of mind, and gentle in manner
Voice soft and sweet, dripping with molasses
Flowing through the lives of others
Bringing light to a midnight world

I am a creture of the night
Exposed by this luminous creature
Evolved from natural selection
I am destined to survive
Without grace, gait, or gorgeousness

With contemptuous eyes I watch
Longing for a hint of imperfection
A break in bearing, a flaw in grammar
Time the sunlight to my blossoming hate
Pleasure building while I wait.


Scheme ABCXX XBAXC XABDD
Poetic Form
Metre 010010110010 11101011010010 1101101010 10101110 1011011 1101101 011110010 011100010 1110101 011111 10100111 101011010 0101001010 101111001 1010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 523
Words 92
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 146
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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