Analysis of Little one…



Little one…
I enquired babe healthy-looking,
 Do those tiny powder bright spots
 in the sun, do they alarm you?
 Do your lungs guzzle them up and about?
 And in your thoughts make inhalation come to an end?
Obstructs your existence while waiting for nightfall;
 acknowledge your surreptitious distress of it.
 Microscopic, imperceptible fragments that are airborne,
 we were pintsized behemoths, laidback,
 until our frames disjointed.
Lastly had that scope of my personal, which ripped away from each other, unraveled us.
 Nevertheless we had the identical uncertainties,
 however why not the similar affections?
We loathed foul facades, couldn't suck in air,
 for distress their viciousness could cross our threshold.
 Desirable by heart impartiality on starboard and port,
 you more than tactless than me.
You yearned for strength as well,
 nonetheless what types of melody makes you vacate,
 Vacate your existence, you're inter being, your awareness.
 What are you expecting, smallest one?


Scheme ABCDEFGHIBJKLMNOPQRSKA
Poetic Form
Metre 101 1111010 11101011 00111011 1111011001 0011100101111 01101011011 01010100111 010010010111 1010101 01101010 1011111100110111100101 00111001000100 10110100010 1110110101 101110011101 0100110010011001 1111011 111111 011111001110 101010101101010 111010101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 974
Words 150
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 795
Words per stanza (avg) 150
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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Diane JacksonBaul

I use poetry to release my inner most deep feelings. Poetry is my outlet to all. Its my therapy, for all that I have gone through and gonna go through.. A place where I'm able to say what I want. Whether criticized or agreed upon. Somewhere I can totally let down my hair. Think as I wish, Think as I can. Somewhere i can be me, and not care who knows, or sees me. No judgement, complete freedom to be me. more…

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