Analysis of Kindred Android



Artwork on a foggy window serves to remind,
Designs that graph the games of a madman,
Of brief adventures with a girl outside mankind,
And her uncanny gift to uncloak his happy.

A bond made from blonde and hints of strawberry,
Desires to escape and live outside a robotic teenagery,
Electronically their heart’s messages would ferry,
Apart they would scaffold an empire of tomorrows.

Adorned in green and red overalls they ascend,
Dashing through the lights of an new tetris dream,
The lunatic’s android could make cries amend,
Her ballads of defying gravity and time machines.

Embracing prohibited: it could upset circuitry,
Put it off and save it for brief last greetings,
It all seems to blur into a singularity for me,
Perhaps a hug would not go astray tonight?

She is not an android I reluctantly confess,
Although near perfection easily deceives,
Destined for greater then my redheaded mess,
But I know she loves me all the same anyway.

My Kindred Android, You live with me always and I know but this:
I will be there as soon as I can.


Scheme ABAC CXCD EXEX CXCX FDFX XB
Poetic Form
Metre 11010101101 011101101 110101011111 00010111110 0111101110 01010101110101 0100011100110 0111101100101 01010110101 1010111111 010111101 01010101000101 01001001101100 11101111110 11111010111 01011110101 111111010001 110101001 1011011101 11111110110 11011111101111 111111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,024
Words 182
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 139
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Akira Dawn

I just thought it would be interesting to get a little feedback on what I write. It is often quite abstract and truly not great (this is not my self-deprecation shining through), but I would really love to improve.I am inspired by the works of Mark Twain in particular, he is amongst the wisest men ever to have lived. more…

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