Analysis of Into the Void, Act II: The Missing Ones, Chapter 2 - Expunged



It seems like I remember when
It felt like this would never end.

Across this chasm I will leap,
Because you make me believe
That I can jump that far.
It's all in your hands now
Don't let me down.

You've let it all go to your head again.

I seem to remember
A time last September
When we had to sever
The ties that
Bound us together.
Promised to never
Bother you again.

The dream is now waking.
My knees are still shaking.
My heart is still breaking.
This mistake that we're making,
These chances we're taking;
This all feels so wrong.

Though years will pass between us,
One day we will meet again.
When that day comes
Will I like what I see?
Will you like what I've become?

While some things never change
Much of us is not the same.
We were perfect for each other,
You and I,
But are we still now?

You can't stay here forever.
I can stay here as long as she can.
What's your better plan?


Scheme AX XXXBX A CCCXCCA DDDDDX XAXXX XXCXB CEE
Poetic Form
Metre 11110101 11111101 01110111 0111101 111111 110111 1111 1111111101 111010 011010 111110 011 11010 10110 10101 011110 111110 111110 1011110 110110 11111 1111011 1111101 1111 111111 1111101 111101 1111101 10011110 101 11111 1111010 111111111 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 853
Words 175
Sentences 18
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 5, 1, 7, 6, 5, 5, 3
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on April 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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I am a university student from Texas, and a bit of a closet-poet. Perhaps I should keep it in the closet, but I am interested in getting feedback on some of my poetry. Let me know what you think! I used to write a lot of poetry when I was a little kid, but eventually lost interest as I got older. I started writing poetry again as a form of art-therapy during a really hard time in my life. I like to try to experiment with different styles and strange metaphors. Understandably, this can make some of my poetry less accessible at times, but occasionally I feel like it pays off. more…

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