Analysis of in two, The rest of us



Rainbow blur the darkened house
intermitten
fire-flys swirl in electric
Smeared across lips
Saying "Merry Christmas"
Silver chains across burgundy lips
fingernails painted shiney black
As she clasped
Je t' aime in all the mirrors
Secretly kissed in Love
about her hears
Whispered from chambers of my heart
Magical picks up the showers of stars
sprinkled across the Night


Scheme ABCDEDFGHIJKLM
Poetic Form
Metre 110101 1 10110010 1011 101010 101011001 101011 111 11101010 100101 0101 10110111 1001101011 100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 381
Words 63
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 308
Words per stanza (avg) 59
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Submitted on May 06, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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